The revision process is a challenge. One new writer problem: Writing a whole lot words that go no where and serve no purpose.

Write like a pro. Each sentence, each paragraph, and each scene should show and amplify your plot, characterization, conflict, and characters’ emotions.

In this episode we identify pointless sentences and easy ways to revise them for more impact and purpose. Show notes are at Club Autumn on FB or get my weekly videos and show notes delivered to your inbox box. Sign up at: autumnbardot/newsletter.